Kambi Kathakal Vellatthil Choodu Draavakam

 

“Ithu shariyaanu .. Alpam koodi samayam thaa .. Plees ..” ente kambi kathakal teecharumaayi undaaya bandhatthine kuricchaanu.
“Enthaanu kaaryam, athu enthaan?”
“Athu valare nallathaanennu ninakkariyille, atho .. Appozhenthaa .. Plees… Enikk nannaayariyaan kuracchu samayam ..”
“Ningalude indriyangal kaatthusookshikkaan enneppole oru teechar njaan thanneyaanu, ennaal nee enne buddhimuttikkunnilla… Athu ningalude kuzhappatthil pokaathirikkilla.”
“Kuracchadhikam samayam cheyyoo… Dayavaayi …”
“Vedanayude vedana… Enikku oru teecharaayirunnu, kurekkaalatthinu shesham ente pradhaana joli, njaan ningalude kanthu paalu kalayukayaanu, ippol ente kidakkayil pokaam, shari teechar..?”
“Shari, ninakku naavu valare rasakaramaanu.
“Oro sthreeyum aasvadikkaan nalloru student aanu.
“Bhartthaavu enneppoleyaakumo?”
“Ithu ellaa aadukalodum oru upadeshtaavalla, ningalude bhartthaavu enganeyaanennu ningalkkariyaam, pakshe avan asvasthanaanu.”
Heyu,
“Orupakshe addheham angane cheyyille?” oru cheriya kutti modal chodyatthinu teecchar chodicchu. “Teecchar ningalude makalude madhurasvabhaavam, vaayayude sugandham, kunjinte vaaya, ningalude kunjine oru praavashyam chumbikkaan kazhiyum.”
“Neeyenthaa?”
“Sathyam sathyam.”
Vazhiyil, njaan ente nagnachithrangal azhicchu maatti nagnanaayittheernnu. Maravippichchirunnathu ente purushathvatthe kandu aa teechar aashcharyappettu. Njaan avalude mukhatthe bhayappettu.
“Teecchar teecchar enthaan?”
“Ninakku enthaanu vendathu?” teechar oru valiya karaar aavashyappettu.
“Ithu aavitti sakkaattu teecchar.. Ithu utthamamaanu”
“Ithinekkaalum nallathaano?”
“Ningaleppolulla oru teechare bhayappedunnathenthin?”
“Ithu ente sanchiyaanu, dvaaram valare cheruthaanu”
“Haa .. Ha .. Ha … Hedu .. Teecchar … !! Sampaan ilaasttiku modal ethra valiya”
“Enikku bhayamilla”
“Adhyaapikayaakaan teechar bhayappedunnilla,
“Ningal poralle?”
“Naanaakku ithine ningalude peranmel adaykkaan”
“Vanchikkaruthu.”
“Njaan oru teecharaayi cheyyaan pokukayaanu, teecchar ningalkkaayi onnum cheyyunnillennu ningal karuthunnu, ningal pokaan bhayakkunnu.. Ningal poyi santhosham nedaan bhayakkunnu..”
“Athil oru kokkiksu ille?”
“Enthu adhyaapikayaanu ningal chodicchath? Ithu anthima nalla kaaryamaanu, ennaal ee maadhuri labhikkaan aagrahikkaattha aarum illa.
“Ashokan .. Teechar bhayakkunnu”
“Njaan teecchar.. Ningal vishamikkenda.”
Njaan poyi teeccharude kaalukalkkidayil poyi. Njaan thondayude thudaccha thalli vidukayaanu. Ente kayyil ente nattellu edutthu ente chundukalil addhyaapakante thoovaalaye ilakki. Teechar thante punchiriyil puthappu tharacchu. Oru cheriya punchiriyode ente daander teeccharude hrudayatthil njaan punchiricchukondirunnu. Ente vayaruvedana ghraaji teecharde punchi vellam vellatthil ozhikkuka thudangi. Likvidu teecchar petti boriyiloode ozhukunnu. Ente sanni chundinte draavakam njaan thottu, teecharde aakruthiyilekku maari. Teecharde puncham vellatthil kulippicchu.
“Ningalkku oru mood ille?”
“Hmm….”
Njaan inayude veettujolikalil ente sanni vasthravaathsalyamundaakki. Njaan arayil kulukkaan shramicchu, ente aayudhatthe teecharde aavaranatthil adicchelppikkaan shramicchu. Teecchar avante aramaninju kulungi punchiricchu. Njaan kuracchu samayam maatti, ente nattellu kuzhiyil ittu. Teechar veendum avalude punchiri maatti. Best kambi kathakal!
“Anlokku cheytha teechar ningalkkullathinekkaal buddhimuttullathaanu”
“Vaananda.. Ashukku.. Njaan bhayannu..”
“Bhayankaramaaya teecharvine kaanaruthu… Onnumilla”
“Maham.. Vithurdha ashoku, namukku ithu nirtthaam”
“Teecchar ennodu parayoo…….. Ningal ottaykkaakilla njaan smithayil marikkum”
“Plees ashoku.. Vegam.. Dayavaayi …”
Teecharodu njaan pranayatthilaayi. Enikku teecharde nerttha adharangal oru nurungu labhicchu. Njaan thalappaal chundicchu; teechar inte adharangale thottu. Aa paavam chumbanam teechar nadatthi. Ennil ninnu, njaan ente chundukal madutthu. Enikku oru kaykondu avarde thala undaayirunnu. Njaan ente kaypidicchu ente kayyetthi. Teecharde maagasinukalkkoppam kalikkunnathu, njaan ente katthi upayogicchu vayattil thirutthi.
Teechar ente manonilayil aayirikkumpol, aval pathukke valaraan thudangi. Teecharde sveeppu thulacchukaanaan pattiya samayamaanennaanu njaan karuthiyirunnathu. Njaan ente arappattiye uyartthi, oru kaal kadicchu. Athaanu ente kattilinulla kannu. Teecharde mruduvaaya thukal vaathil ente vaathil thakartthu, ente pulline aval mohikkunnu. Ente adharam swathanthuramaayi teechar paranju, “O…… Aval mayangi. Avalude kannil vellam ozhuki.
“O …… !!! Ashoku …. Njaan paranjilla …”
“Teecharo .. Mattaarenkilumo illa …”
“O my godu … Plees … Oranchu … Shari … O …… !!!!”
“Oru cheriya kshama… Vedana pokunnu …”
“Mahamma .. Njaan vahikkaan pattilla .. Puratthu …. Pleesu … Dayavaayi …”
Punchiriyude vedanayil teecchar valareyadhikam valarnnu. Vazhiyil ente nattellu edutthu.
Teecharde kanyaka raktham moolam ente kuttan chuvannu. Chuvanna draavakatthil ente kunna muthukalil ninnu adivarayittu pidikkanam. Adutthulla kidakkunna teechare ente nattellu thudakkaan njaan paranju. Teecharde rakthatthe njaan ente kunna vrutthiyaakki. Njaan teecharde punchiyil ninnum raktham thudacchu. Teecharde joli vrutthiyaakkiyappol, kazhutthu pizhinju njaan veendum ente vayattil pidicchu. Hot kambi kathakal!
” ashuku .. Nee enne ariyikkukayaanenkil ..”
“Illa teecchar … Aarum ..”
“Bhayam illa …”
“Ini teechar pedikkaruthu.. Bhayappedaruthu..”
Njaan teecharde ummaratthu ente kunna vecchu pidipicchu. Njaan ente arayil unarnnu, teecharde jolikkaayi ente nila thaazheyaakki. Teechar shvasicchappol njaan marikkaanaayi kaatthirunnu. Njaan sammardam pole, ente vayaru teecharde punchiri thattikkalanju. Teecharde rahasyaathmaka shekharam tyttu aayirunnu. Ente kunna munayil avalude punchiri urappichchu. “Ippol peyintar teechar..”
“Mmu ..”
“Nee ennodu parayaruth?”
“Ningal enne vedanippichchu …”
“Ini vedanayilla.. Ippol ente kunjil ente kutti engane kazhiyum?”
“Shari, nallathu …”
“Ippol enikku nee seksu lahari labhikkaan pokunnu.
“Moli sunda .. Njaan perunnu …”
“Illa, njaan dharikkunna ellaam”
Njaan arayil kulukki odaan thudangi. Teechare bhayappedaan njaan anuvadicchilla. Mruduvaaya kaalinu njaan teecharde sttaaphil veenu. Njaan aa kuppaayatthodu chertthu ninnu. Aa kuzhiyilekku njaan athu edutthu. Avalude punchiriyude santhosham teecchar aasvadikkaan thudangi. Bhayam, bhayam ennivayil ninnu melle melle melle purappedunnu. Ente brayum kaalvum aasvadikkaan thudangi. Ithupolulla kambi kathakal vayikkaan ivide vannoloo…
Njaan teechare kidilam kidakkukayaayirunnu. Avalude mukham ente kandtatthil, avalkku shvaasam ninnilla. Njaan ente kaykalile teecharde pinbhaagatthu ente chumalil vaykkunnu. Ente nenchidikkunna teecharvinte mukhammoodi. Teechar thante kaykal purakil ninnu puratthedutthu. Ente kazhutthu, tholilu, kavil ennivayil avalude nananja chundukal chumbicchu. Njangal paraspara bandhatthilaayirunnu. Samaanathakalillaattha aanandam njangal aasvadicchirunnu.
Kuracchu neram teechar ente kaalil mruduvaakki, teecharde punchiriye minusappedutthukayum cheythu. Aadyatthethu kaalukal adacchu njaan alpam vibhajikkaan thudangi. Churungiya samayatthinullil aval avalude kaalukal muzhuvan neetti avalude punchiriyil ente kunna vaangicchu. “Nalla sukhamaanu teecharaano?”
“Hmmam… Ithu shariyaanu…. Avide oru….”
“Ningalkku ariyaamo… Ningalu oru modal poleyaano?”
“Enganeyaanu ithu thallappedaan pokunnath?”
“Njaan ente punchiriyil ninnum ningale kondupokaan pokunnu, veendum thiricchuvaroo… Angane ningal attharatthilulla ningalude kanthil eriyendi varum… Ellaattharam pushpangalum kuppikalilekku veezhum.
“Ippathiyatha?”
“Hmmm… Athaa teecchar lyku.. Ippolu tymingu”
“Enthaa ith?”
“Ippol kuzhappamilla… Veendum thaazhekku irangaan povukayaanu, ningal kanthu pora ente paalu aayirikkum ..”
“Ohhu…. Ohu….?”
Avalude penkuttiye pettennu vettayaadaan teeccharu padticchu. Oro thavanayum avalude samanirappuntaakkuka idikkumpol ente chuvadum avalude sthreelimgam manoharamaaya ophu kaanicchu. Ente mutthachchhan avalude punchiri manoharamaakkunnathinu athine akatthekku kadakkaan pokunnu. Teecharde charmmatthe ilakkividaan sathyaku naathaku shramicchu. Bundi, sunnikal bhaadar bhaadarumaayi thattikkayarukayum samaanamaaya komaye srushtikkaan thudangi. Aa kaamam ente shareeratthil ellaayidatthum vyaapicchu, njaan niyanthuranamillaathe odaan thudangi.
Njaan vichaaricchappol teechar bheeshaniyilaayilla. Teechar ippol avalude nazhsingu homilekku poyittundu. Ente pena avalude kuzhiyil keerunnu, aval kooduthal sukhamaayirikkunnu. Teechar “Aahu…. O…” enna peril karayunnengkilum, aval oro ghattatthilum avalude vayammine eriyaan marannilla. Njaan ente pallu kadikkukayum ente veyilil avalude kazhutthil pathicchu. Aval ippol oru oohakkacchavadatthil erppettirikkukayaanennu bhayanna teechar. Kali santhoshavum aasvadavum niranjirunnu. Thudarnnu ente kambi kathakal vayikkuka.
Alpam kuracchu neratthekku, njangal athisankeernnamaayi kalikkunnuvennathinushesham vaachaadopamaayi edutthittundu. Vidyaa peeksidiyude munnil polum teecharde punchiriyil ente mullundaayirunnu. Njaan puratthu poyi ente kuzhikalil ninnu draavakam kitti. Vellatthil choodu draavakam teecharde chitharikkidakkukayaayirunnu. Enjoy reading such kambi kathakal over here!

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